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Library of unread stories
Contributed by
Kratnoff
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Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 06:49:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I carry the sun in my Heart,
The moon in my mind,
The ocean in my eyes,
And the weight of the world on my spine.
And it's about to break.
So I'll just stay in bed as the whole world shakes
Because I just don't I have what it takes
To survive this endless earthquake.
They tell me "You're great."
"You're Special."
As if they know me
I hardly know myself
But, how can I be special
When I'm just another unread book on the shelf.
In an endless library full of stories just like mine.
About people who never learned to be happy,
Because they couldn't find the time.
Kratnoff , PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.
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Kratnoff
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2012-06-07 18:49:18]
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Re: Library of unread stories
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by SaxophoneJones on
Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 07:11:21 PM AEST
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This is very good for your first attempt. It flows smoothly as if from a song, and is quite touching. Well done.
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Re: Library of unread stories
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 09:19:37 PM AEST
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if this is your first atempt please keep writing,this is beautiful,you got what it takes thanks for sharing
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Re: Library of unread stories
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by me_me on
Saturday, 9th June 2012 @ 09:42:38 PM AEST
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| good. i enjoyed it |
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