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Our Creed
Contributed by
SaxophoneJones
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Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 06:22:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Like cogs in a watch
We dance with flawed perfection
Our purpose unknown
Like helpless infants
We blindly wander forward
Our intentions clear
Like heartless monsters
We make this world our puppet
Our love undying
Like faithful soldiers
We fight for a righteous cause
Our struggles in vain
This is our creed
Copyright ©
SaxophoneJones
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2012-06-07 18:22:05]
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Re: Our Creed
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 06:26:38 PM AEST
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Hi, I find this different, but your words are touching.
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Re: Our Creed
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 04:44:58 PM AEST
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differewnt but well put,thanks for sharing
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Re: Our Creed
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 9th June 2012 @ 09:16:57 AM AEST
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Your poem strike a good cord . We got to keep fighting even if the going gets tough. Nice job here. Keep those poetic juices flowing.
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