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Your Blush
Contributed by
ramfire
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Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 06:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your blush was most attractive.
Did only my words do that?
Close to you from where I sat,
I was then totally captive.
My heart and mind gave combat.
I should have left you alone.
But my heart is not of stone,
and so I gave you soft chat.
Your eyes told me this dear Joan
that you liked the words I spoke.
They could neither hide nor cloak
the deep love for me well shown.
Take from me this coward’s thought,
for me so unattractive.
To flee love is repulsive,
and is with much danger fraught
Your blush was most attractive.
Did only my words do that?
Close to you from where I sat,
I was then totally captive.
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Re: Your Blush
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 06:20:33 PM AEST
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Nice write, what style poem is this?
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Re: Your Blush
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by SaxophoneJones on
Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 07:16:33 PM AEST
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An interesting way of expressing such an ambiguous feeling that many have felt, but few can put into words as you have. Well done.
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Re: Your Blush
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by Elia on
Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 08:30:46 PM AEST
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| Good witem I like the different way you rhymed this. |
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Re: Your Blush
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th June 2012 @ 03:15:17 AM AEST
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Beautiful write as always.
smile, blessings,
emy |
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