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Polarity and Gravitation

Contributed by plasticherry on Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 03:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

ts after dark now and the stars can be seen
Dropping of all the remnants of Earth under my feet
Slowly drifting into space
The galaxy is embracing me twisting me into a spiral
Cosmic solution around me turns into a womb
The stars slowly melt into my pores reflecting cosmic pollen
Slowly drifting in space
No ground below my feet, subzero
And so my heart wonders further into the dark
Aural lights reflected on my nails
No oxygen
Just endlessly floating through the dimension
Like a prototypical doll I stare into the space
Astral bodies, next to my body floating,
Is better than having nobody
Nothing but serenity and wonder
What will I discover venturing into the unknown?
I wonder,
Although I cannot move, my heart
Feels like a rocket shooting off million light years away.
And I'm caught in the gravity
The galaxy's symmetrical movements.
Uncontrollable pleasure of freely floating,
Unbound by Earth's rotation.
Far away image projecting,
It pierces right through me like a hologram
All the things I left on Earth,
I have forgotten.
Pleasure.
I'm burning up like flames of a thousand suns,
My heart imploding leaving no trace of feeling
I can no longer control my body,
Symmetrical movements, the rotation.
My body is slowly spinning around, my heart
The slow burden of gravity keeps my body moving.
I could almost see the cables coiling around me,
You can't feel more like a robot when you're floating in space.
And I'm blazing up, just like a supernova once more.
Burning up and leaving no trace
Until there's silence in space again.

Copyright © plasticherry ... [ 2012-06-07 15:12:29]
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Re: Polarity and Gravitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th June 2012 @ 05:33:29 PM AEST
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You're right, I do like it.

Thank you,

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

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