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In The Darkness
Contributed by
Ravan
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In The Darkness
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In the darkness all dreams are made true.
We see one another with only our hearts.
We're seventeen again, despite time's hand,
Loving with a passion we once thought dead.
In the darkness cruel time holds no sway.
Yesterday's thoughts and deeds are nothing.
Tomorrow's are things that may never be,
Leaving us with only this fleeting, precious now.
In the darkness we are no longer alone.
Here we share a brief yet eternal joining.
Fused into one by the flames of twin desires,
We move in timeless dance to love's sweet song.
In the darkness we find freedom to love,
Releasing our hearts from that safe place,
We bind them, setting them joyously free,
Until, at parting, we sadly cage them once again.
Frank Van Hoose
April 6, 2002
Revised
May 8, 2003.
Copyright ©
Ravan
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2003-05-09 06:35:00]
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Re: In The Darkness
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:45:53 PM AEST
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that was good
odd but goood |
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Re: In The Darkness
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by Ravan on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 02:30:25 PM AEST
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Hi :) Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
This is one that I revised and moved from teh 'old' archived site. I have several more there if you would like to see them. I think that you will find that 'odd' is a word that might come to mind often when reading something I've written.
Thanks again for reading. And for writing.
frank |
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