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Choke-Hold
Contributed by
daniel
on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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it's ending
when the show has quit pretending
there is something
coming on up to see.
yea it's sour
but we're down the hour
you're just fine and i climb
along the freed, and well i can.
i can't figure this time why i'm pushing to keep up
here's the choke-hold as i crumble with the next old
integrated simple sequence taking me, understand:
here's the manifesto
here's a lie for all you know
you signed the docket & pulled this from your pocket
here's a lie for all you know.
yea it's ending
when the show has quit pretending
there is something
still coming up to see.
yea it's sour
but we're down this hour
you're just fine and i climb
along the freed, and well i can.
i can't figure this time why i'm pushing to keep up
here's the choke-hold as i crumble with the next old
cremated motive choked gnashing teeth, understand
that:
here's the manifesto
here's a lie for all you know
you signed the docket & pulled this from your pocket
here's a lie for all you know.
here's the scenario
here's a lie for all you know
you bill retractments superceding all enactments
here's a lie for all you know.
lies...
lies...
they're all lies...
they're all lies...
they're lies to choke on.
lies to glue the pages.
lies to tame the broken.
lies to build the cages.
you can't make the pilot break ground to this.
seasons don't reciprocate me.
you can't have grand finales take corners lit.
seasons don't reciprocate me.
here's the manifesto
here's a lie for all you know
you signed the docket & pulled this from your pocket
here's a lie for all you know.
how can you win?
if you pawn the first world.
hiding the truth, don't you lose?
explained benifits.
all supply and demand.
that is your proof? you still lose.
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-05-09 06:05:00]
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Re: Choke-Hold
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by SomethingClever on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:57:48 AM AEST
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| I thought it was great... good hook... "here's a lie for all you know" |
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Re: Choke-Hold
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 10:02:52 AM AEST
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This is deep... oh is it ever! :)
~*Dani |
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