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Because I love u
Contributed by
me_me
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Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 08:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dear all
i feel really sad and pathetic .:(.
I woke up and though
What if my soul
Submits to its lord?
How will my love live?
A part of me wanted u move on
Big part of me, wanted u to hold on
Something whispered, I didn’t want u far
If not a mummy then an aunty I could be
Now I know how painful it would have been.
I remember saying
Marry my sister if I die before u
I wish u told me, that it was none sense
I wish u had said sorry “I can never”,
“I long and belong to u”.
U got shocked but then agreed
My heart full of grid,
It trembled; I couldn’t stop the tears crawling down
My heart was on fire.
Where is the love I once believed?
Were lovers longed for each other?
Were one seals his heart, and forbids loving again.
Because I love u,
And I wanted comfort and assurance
That you will forever be mine
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me_me
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2012-06-05 20:31:48]
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Re: Because I love u
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by ShatteredLove on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 09:34:51 PM AEST
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| Hmm interesting I feel like this a lot |
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Re: Because I love u
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 6th June 2012 @ 01:29:44 PM AEST
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Hi,
By reading your poem, i feel you have a lot of sadness at heart. You can really relieve that sadness by writing and putting your thoughts on paper. What really kills the pain is when you're able to right something so beautiful and people write you wonderful comments. This helps bring a sense of worth to your life and helps you to realize that you don't need to lock up your soul. The words you wrote have a lot of meaning, but i think if you write them differently, you can make that poem shine and express yourself to the fullest, thus giving yourself a full sense of clarity.
Wayne |
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