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To Voice an opinion!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
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To voice your opinion,
I guess is some sin,
Others seem to ridicule,
Tell you things that are creul,
Its my right to voice what I feel,
some people are just so unreal,
I speak my mind,when I can,
Some people don't always understand,
They might not agree,
But this is the land of the free,
Ridicule me thats just fine,
I can speak my mind,
If I agree or disagree,
Its my right so let me be,
I'm my own person,no two people are the same,
we have different opinions,have you no shame?
I voice my thoughts as so do you,
I'm speaking out,I have a right too!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-05-09 06:05:00]
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Re: To Voice an opinion!
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:15:39 AM AEST
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| Good , you have a right too, .. a straight write.. venkat |
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Re: To Voice an opinion!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:56:20 AM AEST
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good write stay strong
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Re: To Voice an opinion!
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 10:39:38 AM AEST
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Christina, you stick too your guns!! I go through this all of the time. Im a blunt person and say what I feel and people cant handle it so they call me a *****, oh well Im proud of the fact I have an opinion and dont conform too the thinking and feelings of everyone around me. Just as you should be my friend!! Great write!!
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Re: To Voice an opinion!
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by Aristotle on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:27:43 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I have only one thing that struck me. In the 9th line and on, there are a lot of ee sounds. Agree, free (the rhyme) then, riducle me, the two lines later you are back to agree, disagree, be. To me it just seems like to many ee's. The subject is great and i completely agree. Overall I think that this is a great poem. Nice job. |
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