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Marine
Contributed by
monday_girl
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Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 01:03:19 AM in AEST
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I dreamed a soldier
A man for me a man
Without a tiny bit of fear
A man in blue
His chest was bleeding
His chest was bleeding and I ran
For help
But in this dream i couldn't move
My legs were made of stone and glass and glue
I cried without a sound
My man - he didn't knew that he was mine -
He leaned into a wall
This man in blue
But I just couldn't speak until he's fine
And when I saw white morning grass
I had
To choose
And I chose name
A name i didn't , couldn't knew
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monday_girl
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Re: Marine
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by thesinner on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 05:59:43 AM AEST
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| Interesting in the abstract |
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Re: Marine
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 09:55:07 AM AEST
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very nice writing,glad it was just a dream though.thanks for sharing,
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Re: Marine
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 01:10:17 PM AEST
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he didn't knew that he was mine -
A name i didn't , couldn't knew
Did you mean "know"?
Anyway, nice premise. I like dreams/dream state but the knew threw me.
Thanks,
Tim
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