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I Cant Help but Miss You
Contributed by
ShatteredLove
on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 10:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't know what to do
All I can think about is you
Everyday and every night
You make my heart take flight
Want nothing but for you to be in my arms
The one place where I can keep you safe from harm
To feel your lips against mine
And our fingers intertwined
Being so far apart
It breaks my heart
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ShatteredLove
... [
2012-06-04 22:13:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Cant Help but Miss You
(User Rating: 1 ) by cathartic on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 12:34:51 AM AEST (User
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I think you'll get better in time. Focus more on what you want to say, rather than what rymes with what you're saying. I have been writing poems since I was 10 and I am still mastering the art of ryme. Keep working at it. |
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