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Contributed by
GroverGirl18
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The wind blows gently across my face
The sweet smell of the air I can taste
As the sune shines high above
The tree tops tall
In the unsurpassed silence
There are birds chirping to one and other
What they are saying is unknown to me
The vacant lot across the street is
So empty, so bare.
I once knew who lived there.
The silence has been broken by 2 unsuspecting girls
Who are both living in their own little worlds
Their presence has ignored my state of absence
But the wind sitll blows gently across my face
And I can still taste the sweet air
And the sun still shines high
Above the tree tops tall.
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2003-05-09 05:05:00]
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Re: Unknown
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 11:41:50 AM AEST
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It's very rare that you get more than a moment completely to yourself. Nature is a noisy companion.
But then you can be alone in a crowd.
Its all in the state of mind (consciousness)
I can fall asleep in front of the telly' with it full on.
A very interesting and enjoyable read |
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Re: Unknown
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by rosebud on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 04:46:01 PM AEST
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| This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read. |
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