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Insomnia
Contributed by
monday_girl
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Sunday, 3rd June 2012 @ 08:44:41 PM in AEST
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I am blank
I should not say that
I should not try to
Wake you up
Every time
I can not sleep
I should just lay there
I should give up
But
I am lost and
I am empty
Guess i should hide it
Guess i should run
But
I am me
And it confuses me
Its weak this rock
I'm standing on
I really shouldn't
Wake you up now
I'ts almost morning
I smell the dawn
I hear you breathing
I hear you breathing
And it's the greatest sound
Of all
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monday_girl
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2012-06-03 20:44:41]
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Re: Insomnia
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by Elia on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 07:24:36 AM AEST
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| I truly join you in your smelling the dawn. Feel glad that you have someone to be laying next to for you to listen to.breath. :-) |
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Re: Insomnia
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 02:44:03 PM AEST
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I joyn Elia - you are fortunate to have somebody to listen to breathng. Praise te Lord for it. You could have only bed bugs to torment you. like I had.
Very well composed Lamento. Turn to the Lord!
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: Insomnia
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by plasticherry on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 11:54:25 PM AEST
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