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Tears of Love
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Saturday, 2nd June 2012 @ 10:54:55 AM in AEST
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Love happens
Once at a time.
Heart falls
Once in a life.
That was said by the books.
That was thought as the truth.
But I suffered a different fate.
Tears of love knocked me down twice a date.
The first time I thought
My heart has got,
A person so special
For whom my mind has been divided into sections.
Half of them think how to please her
And the rest think how not to make her sad.
My heart was in an illusion.
That it has got the solution
Of defining a feeling
Which has no definition.
Without asking her
It kept on celebration
'We are made for each other.'
But the girl left me.
With a farewell of tears.
The whole year
Was of despair.
I was attacked emotionally
miserably.
I thought it would be a crush.
But it turned out to be love.
I was weeping
I was cut out of the world.
But then world cut me off from itself.
I was send to a new place.
to a new culture.
to find a new mate.
The second one was different
But also a bit similar.
The lovely moments with first one were dancing in my body.
When my eyes were seeing her.
I don't know why I started running away from her shadow.
But felt somewhere that I need nothing else but her presence.
There was something in her
Which was driving me crazy.
One day I elaborated
My heart to her.
But alas this time
She was not on my side.
She refused
And I used
The tears, the sorrow
To fill the hollow pain.
This pain is now going to remain for late.
That tears of love knocked me down twice a date.
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2012-06-02 10:54:55]
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Re: Tears of Love
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by tojezanas on
Saturday, 2nd June 2012 @ 12:17:12 PM AEST
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Thank you for your great expression ...
The poem seems to explain your pain quite well.
However, I'd really like to read your next one, maybe a poem with a slight touch of rainbow at the end.
Be well 'artist'!
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Re: Tears of Love
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by richard2 on
Sunday, 3rd June 2012 @ 06:38:04 PM AEST
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Heartfelt and expressed well, failed love is still love.
I have been there, for eleven years I went from'
one to next to the next, on and on until a pair of blue eyes
said I love you and that was the end of failure.
I truly beleive there is someone for every woman.
for every man.
Take care
Richard |
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