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Thunder Storm
Contributed by
Elia
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Friday, 1st June 2012 @ 03:47:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Loud noise and bright light.
All I wish for on this night.
In the rain I shall dance
Whilst being sent into a trance
Singing in a shower, that nature does provide
Enjoying every minute that soul and nature colide.
When your gone, i
I truely miss
your feeling of absoloute bliss
but back someday you will be
With another chance for me to feel free
Copyright ©
Elia
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2012-06-01 03:47:13]
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Re: Thunder Storm
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by northernlights on
Friday, 1st June 2012 @ 05:36:40 AM AEST
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| The connection between the storm and a hypersensitive soul causes its own electricity which is addictive and something that is sought after for the next time,again you have expressed this well and i connect and relate to all of what you have described. |
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Re: Thunder Storm
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by thezenmonkey on
Friday, 1st June 2012 @ 07:26:08 AM AEST
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I love watching storms
nothing beats a good storm, for some reason I find them to have a calming, relaxing influence.
nice poem. |
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Re: Thunder Storm
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 2nd June 2012 @ 04:39:33 AM AEST
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I agree, storms are fascinating things.
A real demonstration of the power of nature.
You've captured that mystery here and presented it well to us all
Nice work
Steve |
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