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Teardrops Explode
Contributed by
sebgreen
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Thursday, 31st May 2012 @ 01:42:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My soul shrivels,
An autumn leaf,
Feather for each wind that blows,
As your teardrops
Explode and past joys flow
Around your hazy features,
Beautiful sorrow,
In rivulets to the ground.
Copyright ©
sebgreen
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2012-05-31 13:42:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Teardrops Explode
(User Rating: 1 ) by HIV on
Thursday, 31st May 2012 @ 01:56:49 PM AEST (User
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WOW! that's so pretty:)
I loved it.
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Re: Teardrops Explode
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Thursday, 31st May 2012 @ 02:03:42 PM AEST (User
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less is more,strong imagery,well written |
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