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My '85 Dying Vehicle (a sonnet)
Contributed by
TropicaDextrose
on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
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My car has ended its earthly career
A frightened shudder, a stall, spirits rise
In vinegar steam, that burns auto’s eyes
An exodus, the Fate’s interfere
Death a right enough word, Life’s only peer,
Has overcome Pistolos wit & wise
An overdrive transmission circumcise
Black smoke like op. at the funeral Lear
Broken brights, distorted aborted gear
Leaks tap the ground to technique mechanize
Oil, fuel, fluid, stay in? Don’t fantasize
Something, brakes inside… oh quiet and queer
Sorry to see thee go up into flames
I was not the man to hold on the reins
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TropicaDextrose
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2003-05-09 02:05:00]
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Re: My '85 Dying Vehicle (a sonnet)
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 07:57:50 AM AEST
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I'm going to dedicate your poem to every
car I ever owned...Now..write a poem
about a whip to get them to go.... |
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Re: My '85 Dying Vehicle (a sonnet)
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by princesspurty on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 08:00:07 PM AEST
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| cute, and sad to say I owned one like this in a way |
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