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She
Contributed by
DeathIsRefuge
on
Sunday, 27th May 2012 @ 02:12:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She doesn't understand
How much i care,
Her beauty can stop the rain and bring out the sun,
Her kindness prevents my pain,
When im not with her
I continue to think
My future with her will be pretty and pink,
Yet she doesn't know that i love,
When with her its like doves
Majestically flying in the sunset,
She wishes to remain friends,
But i disagree
She means too much,
My love will forever be,
Shes my love that may never be,
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2012-05-27 02:12:23]
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Re: She
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by BagsFoSho on
Tuesday, 29th May 2012 @ 12:39:35 AM AEST
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| Great poem that I can really relate to. Love the simple, short approach. |
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Re: She
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by Maygee on
Wednesday, 30th May 2012 @ 12:14:45 PM AEST
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| simple but touching, especially loved the last finishing lines |
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