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The puppet
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 11:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The wooden jaw of a puppet descends,
The words of a man form in the open cavity of its mouth.
People laugh.
A childhood memory sits in a tree
The branches hold with time
A small plastic toy
A shadow of something left behind.
The moon cradles the surface of distant water.
An expectant mother watches.
A fan maintains its cyclic journey,
Oscillates, and then stops
Turns course.
Stone surfaces stand ready among the fruit
A dandelion stands at the hub of a seed
The crown is silver white and yellow
The top opens the way to a sweet
Brown swath
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2012-05-26 23:04:38]
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Re: The puppet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th May 2012 @ 01:49:23 AM AEST
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I don't know what to say, I wish I wrote this, like a cad.
I thank you for, I will have to read it again. Because, its that good!!!
It exemplifies, and I don't know what good writing is, but, this is good... don't stop, I'm sure you won't.
Thanks!
Peace!
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Re: The puppet
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by AznDemon300 on
Sunday, 27th May 2012 @ 07:29:19 PM AEST
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| Nice simple poem. |
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Re: The puppet
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by sambonitz on
Monday, 28th May 2012 @ 09:05:05 AM AEST
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| good use of words. simple but yet complex. job well done |
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Re: The puppet
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by plasticherry on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 03:51:19 PM AEST
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| I like few of the expressions |
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