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evil lies within
Contributed by
sambonitz
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Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 08:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Evil lies within all
Sometimes not shown
But will eventually call
It strikes in the strangest ways
Will ruin lives
And your best days
Now way to avoid the inevitable truth
Original sin
We have the proof
It’s how long that it will stay asleep
Close your eyes
Grit your teeth cause one day it will reach
Breaking point where lives will be lost
Blood will be shed
No mercy no matter what the cost
Take it to the tomb
Keep your mind sealed
Release it to Devil, and invoke certain doom.
Take people and their lives into consideration.
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sambonitz
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2012-05-26 20:51:52]
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Re: evil lies within
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 10:53:31 PM AEST
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Perhaps, with caution, If you don't recognize this, you can't.
Protectionism, who do they protect? Who is unprotected, do I care? If I was unprotected I would. And is this the opposite of evil, no. No, it is not.
This is dark but it needs light. It's a fundamental honesty you should try to escape from but maybe never do.
Like why, why, no one can answer why truly why so they give up. The root of evil is taboo. A condescending Liberal concept never to be answered. Just like a moral compass might only exist in myth.
It's a dark poem. Dostoyevski like, read Crime and Punishment if you have not. It's filled with a lot of truth and vileness. And it sheds a most improbable light on redemption.
Thanks --- bold poem.
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Re: evil lies within
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by yeboaheu on
Monday, 28th May 2012 @ 08:55:24 AM AEST
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