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Untitled
Contributed by
BlueRose23
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Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 04:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We all got troubles you and me
its how you spend the time that's free
So pour that red with a heavy hand
go annoy that kindly friend
Cuz sometimes they see the light you forgot
Even though something stirs that inside pot
It helps you finish the race
Or take that deep breath
But a friend will help you see
the laughter fought.
Copyright ©
BlueRose23
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2012-05-26 16:31:32]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 06:24:08 PM AEST
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Re: Untitled
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 07:10:04 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Good work. Keep writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Untitled
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 29th May 2012 @ 08:04:18 AM AEST
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clever!
nice poem |
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