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NIGHT WALK
Contributed by
poewhit
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Thursday, 24th May 2012 @ 02:33:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Out my window, I look.
Women on the hook.
Young and lost with style.
Past the finish line mile.
Painted face, with the lost look.
Wanting an image, but not booked.
Inside really crying for love.
At home resting, the peaceful dove.
Darkness shrouds this sorted life.
All really wishing to be a wife.
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Re: NIGHT WALK
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 24th May 2012 @ 05:35:44 PM AEST
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| If only we lived in a world where money wasn't so dominant, and people's choices were made by what makes the happy. |
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Re: NIGHT WALK
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by Reverend_T on
Thursday, 24th May 2012 @ 11:10:32 PM AEST
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| I'm not entirely sure, but did you mean "sordid"? |
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Re: NIGHT WALK
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 25th May 2012 @ 08:48:35 AM AEST
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very nice
thanks for sharing
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Re: NIGHT WALK
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by dojo1970 on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 11:05:20 AM AEST
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| There are definitely too many women out there like that. It's a shame really. Good writing. |
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