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Dusk
Contributed by
sebgreen
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Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 12:54:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Ardent rose burning bright
The pink clouds set the sky alight
A jet plane passes meteorite
Through the hanging garden where colors fight
A vain battle against the night.
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sebgreen
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2012-05-22 12:54:45]
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Re: Dusk
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2012 @ 07:36:03 AM AEST
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| I really like the visuals in your words. It made me think. Great write. Thank you for sharing. P |
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Re: Dusk
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by flavellm on
Monday, 28th May 2012 @ 01:17:54 PM AEST
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| too short that haha, nevertheless wonderfully sculptured _where colours fight_ cracking line |
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