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Do I Surrender
Contributed by
drogedarain
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Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 11:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Chemicals flow through my gray matter,
some gingerly trickle like serene mountain streams,,,
Others rush and collide like a swollen rivers rage against its banks,
concocting emotions, desires and often insanity,,,
There is no cure for this anomaly, that seems to occur daily,
it all began so smooth and blissful as a child,,,
As age progressively takes me over with no option,
these rushes of chemicals seem to be taking me hostage,,,
Voices they come and go grasping each tendril tightly, though
at times ever so softly, caressing and chocking me in ways I knew not existed,,,
Can the smooth and blissful feelings as a child return once more
and help me get through a day without confusion and strife,,,
Or do I surrender to the voices pleas to end my life?
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drogedarain
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2012-05-20 23:43:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Do I Surrender
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Monday, 21st May 2012 @ 04:00:37 AM AEST (User
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Tranquility is not the essence of life unfortunately. Children are not joyful because they have no problems, but rather because they choose to play and have fun regardless of circumstance. :) What a wonderful poem! I loved it through and through! |
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Re: Do I Surrender
(User Rating: 1 ) by dojo1970 on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 09:35:48 AM AEST (User
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It's good to express yourself through poetry. Sounds like you had some real trouble in your life. I hope that you are feeling better now. Don't give up! |
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