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Fictitious Love

Contributed by ladysarah on Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 06:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The moment I let go
is the moment I was finally free.
I had to stop believing
we were meant to be.
Sometimes we fall in love
with a person we create.
Sometimes we force the future,
because we're too impatient
to wait.
Sometimes we are blinded
by what we want to be true
and preted we are ok,
because that's all that we can do.
This relationship I fabricated is coming to an end.
I am breaking up with the thought of you,
and accepting us as friends.

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Re: Fictitious Love (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Monday, 21st May 2012 @ 08:16:17 AM AEST
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lady sarah that is beautiful.
very well worded
felt the flow from the very first line & that is hard for anyone to do,that is worth the read & a comment
thank you for sharing
Roy AKA the hot shot poet

Re: Fictitious Love (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Monday, 21st May 2012 @ 10:06:28 AM AEST
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friends are more dear than lovers there is nothing fictitious in being friends I love all my friends even you as a friend

Re: Fictitious Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Maygee on Wednesday, 30th May 2012 @ 12:28:27 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. Full of truth, honesty and maturity. I can really relate to it. Great work :)

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