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the valley of the mind
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 10:03:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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as I lay here in the valley
where the green grass grows
my thoughts are free to wonder
where nobody ever goes
my imagination can create
anything I want to see
no matter the design
it belongs to only me
the mind creates the image
the image creates the way
to turn your picture into words
the ones you want to say
eveyone has a different
picture in there mind
I believe no two are the same
by our own design
we create what we want to see
the image is our own
although we share what we visualize
to the things we've always known
so as I lay here in the valley
my mind becomes a kit
the only meaning of this
is to take another hit
the hot shot poet
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Re: the valley of the mind
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 11:18:38 AM AEST
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| A very nice flow, thanks for posting it. |
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Re: the valley of the mind
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by Raggie on
Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 02:04:58 AM AEST
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| Nice one. Drew me to picture myself sat pondering in a wooded glade:) |
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Re: the valley of the mind
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by girish on
Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 06:13:28 AM AEST
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nice write imagination makes the poet more expressive. Atop the montain it has its flow
And down the valley it will futher go. this is imagination |
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Re: the valley of the mind
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by dojo1970 on
Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 09:47:20 AM AEST
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| The mind is the most creative device on this planet. It's amazing what we can dream up even if it's just fantasy. Great work. |
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