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Oblivion night
Contributed by
gypsymaddness
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Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 02:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Who is that, that creeps oh so slowly beyond me?A darkness within the dark,a shadow of fear thrills through my heart.Who are you to lurk, scaring the innocence?Who are you to make one contemplate their sins?There is no one else, except you and I. No one to help, if it come's to a fight for the life.The street is erie, silent and gloomy.The single street-light lighting the figure, as it stalks closer and nearer.Who are you, I call out.Who are you!There is no answer as you move.A flash of silver, in your hand,then a burst of bright pain, with no warning or chance.Falling to knee's, clutching my side,as the dark figure, in a taunting voice, confides,of it's hatred and contempt,taking it's first shocking step,and as I try to understand,the dark come's deeper, sucking all light,and I unwillingly fall to theOblivion night.
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Re: Oblivion night
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by Raggie on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 05:17:23 AM AEST
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| Well written. It gripped me and made me think. I don't really read much dark poetry. I am glad I read this one though:) |
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Re: Oblivion night
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by girish on
Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 06:19:28 AM AEST
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| nice write good description thanks for sharing |
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Re: Oblivion night
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 04:36:14 PM AEST
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superb write!
your darkside I like. |
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Re: Oblivion night
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 08:50:10 PM AEST
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creepy; but wicked good!
hugs n' love nessa |
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