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Ode to cream puffs
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
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Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 09:50:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Delicate and yummy cannot stop
this is a problem .... because i am stuck
The door frame is tight against my wings
It doesn't help that there's more in front of me
"Cream puffs , Cream puffs come to my belly"
I beg and pray ...that i can get out
Someone approaches looks at the plate
Takes it and leaves leaving my heart broken
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Re: Ode to cream puffs
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 04:25:57 AM AEST
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| Being a chocahollic I identify with this totally. I think the use of,'ode to,' can be so much fun and you have shown this in this thoroughly enjoyable poem.. |
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Re: Ode to cream puffs
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 10:10:28 AM AEST
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very good write the title caught my eye.thanks for sharing
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