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dark love
Contributed by
chethu
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Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 06:45:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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"I yelled to moon, that I can't dance
as a fox without tail, a peacock with no feathers-I am
because I have no you and you know I
I loved you here and there
but you showed me hate now and then
you made me slide in green sky and fly in blue grass
darling miss you as much as I loved you"
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chethu
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2012-05-18 06:45:05]
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Re: dark love
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by ShaeBay on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 10:25:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I love the references with the animals and the opposite descriptions. Very delightful read with great meaning
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Re: dark love
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 04:09:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful. passionate and striking cry for a love no worthy of it.
Blessings
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Re: dark love
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 04:48:00 PM AEST
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| stupid comment but poetic. |
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