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Misty Haze
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 02:33:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Eyes have turned to tidepools
heart sitting heavy in my chest.
Frustration resisted gravity
falling down a black tar pit.
Lost inside my misty haze
looking past tear stained gaze
razors slicing at my heart
feeling as my world is coming apart.
Coping? No not tonight
feeling like it all is slipping away..
I stand feeling helpless
I fall feeling helpless
Misty Haze
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shelby
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2012-05-18 02:33:12]
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Re: Misty Haze
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 09:29:21 AM AEST
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beautiful as usual shelby,thanks for sharing
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Re: Misty Haze
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 07:09:40 PM AEST
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Great writing, girl friend.
luv ya,
emy |
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Re: Misty Haze
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 09:54:47 PM AEST
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| :'-( |
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Re: Misty Haze
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by workinprogress on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 09:58:54 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this, I was left wanting more! Thanks! |
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Re: Misty Haze
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by Raggie on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 05:26:33 AM AEST
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| Another beautiful write shelby, another reason to be here:) |
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Re: Misty Haze
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by Spike on
Thursday, 31st May 2012 @ 12:26:26 AM AEST
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Shelly Bean,
I had a run of these nights recently. Horrible but fleeting, thankfully. Just keep falling - solid ground greets us eventually.
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