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How life strange is
Contributed by
poetryislife
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Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 12:28:03 PM in AEST
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ambiguous
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I was meeting her when we were children
we were playing and were still unknown
All what was in front of us was too long
A journey of life was either long
II
At twenty,There was a little hope to engage
However, she had been engaged
To whom? To someone is still unknown
Therefore, life will no longer be known
This is my second poem,,, And comment is from you because I like to read your criticism to every single poem I post in this the great website
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Re: How life strange is
(User Rating: 1 ) by richard2 on
Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 03:35:55 PM AEST (User
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An interesting poem, strikes a chord with me
I knew a girl like that once.
Although I have written long stuff, I like short poems that say much with less words,
those words chosen with great care.
take care
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