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Worth the time
Contributed by
workinprogress
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Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 11:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where are you?
Not too far away?
I yearn for you.
It feels like the right time.
Is it though?
I am a workinprogress
I still have the dark.
Inviting into the light.
It's getting much brighter.
My love grows.
The patterns, the armor, the walls.
It all a workinprogress.
It is a beautiful place.
Warm.loving.secure.
Our spirits and souls
Vibrate as one.
We can't hide the passion we share.
It shines from inside out.
I am a workinprogress.
It's worth the time.
Copyright ©
workinprogress
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2012-05-16 11:40:59]
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Re: Worth the time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 12:00:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful.  |
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Re: Worth the time
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by thehotshotpoet on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 12:31:09 PM AEST
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truly awesome work great job now I wanna read more.keep up the good work
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Re: Worth the time
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by gypsymaddness on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 05:02:50 PM AEST
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| This is really great. I love how you use your 'pen-name' in here. It works. And thanks for the comment on my poem. Great wishes to you, and hope you keep on writing poetry :-) |
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Re: Worth the time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 06:01:10 AM AEST
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| This is great! |
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Re: Worth the time
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by bryantjunior on
Friday, 1st June 2012 @ 05:49:32 AM AEST
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| love it |
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Re: Worth the time
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by percival86jack on
Sunday, 9th September 2012 @ 09:10:52 AM AEST
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| Your poem shines from inside out! Nice... cheers! |
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