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Pointless Persistance
Contributed by
braq14
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Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 11:28:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To the girl that I continually try to impress, caress and test,
ultimately causing me to evolve into levels of stress
That I have not met or strive to connect.
Trying to compete with the elemental nature of destiny
Who has such success at making me feel indubitably blessed
To be a part of such a terrific mess
Then turns around stabs me in the chest
With no regret. Myself watching the blood drip to the floor,
In sync with my heartbeat that beats for the one I adore.
Shining brown eyes piercing into soul.
Reviving me as it kills me. Trying to condemn me.
But still I rise.
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braq14
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2012-05-16 11:28:14]
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Re: Pointless Persistance
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 01:39:07 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem (strictly in a relatable way). She doesn't know what she's missing! Well written. Keep writing! :) |
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Re: Pointless Persistance
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by BabyJewels94 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 01:40:16 PM AEST
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| very beautiful, i actually felt your persistence as i read and I'm not a professional but this was a terrific write. |
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