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Closure or Not
Contributed by
SweetGirl
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Monday, 14th May 2012 @ 11:58:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Closure was our intentions at first
But the good love we made became a curse.
We became closer and closer and it happened so fast
We forgot about the closure we talked about in the past.
We agreed to be just friends because of the situations
But the love and feelings we share is causing complications.
I know you love me but I love you more
And only God will tell us whats next in store.
So, did we have closure? We still don't know
But we will remain friends as we both show.
Closure or not God knows best
And He will tell us where our friendship goes next!
Copyright ©
SweetGirl
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2012-05-14 23:58:20]
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Re: Closure or Not
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by LadySarah on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 01:30:32 AM AEST
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| Great poem! I loved the structure and flow. The theme was very relatable and reminded me of a break-up situation. |
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Re: Closure or Not
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by poewhit on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 04:58:28 AM AEST
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| Prayer to God can move mountains. |
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Re: Closure or Not
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 06:58:20 AM AEST
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awesome writing sweetgirl thankyou for sharing
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