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Daddy
Contributed by
foreveryoung
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Monday, 14th May 2012 @ 12:07:40 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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A little girl with big hopes and dreams
She was caught up in fairy tales forgot all about reality
Until one day her world came crashing down
Her father was no longer around
Her hero was dead and gone
he wasn't coming home
The only best friend she'd ever known
Mommy trying to help her cope
But she herself was finding it hard to move on
Without him around it was difficult to stand strong
She looks up above asks God why,
Why did daddy have to go God
Why did you take his soul
He was suppose to be here to help me grow.
Whos gonna protect mommy and me
Daddy promised me a game of hide and seek
And bedstories to me he's suppose to read
What about the drawings I made for him, he didnt even get to see
Please God bring my daddy back
My hopes cannot be shattered this way
I need one more chance
To say the things that I didn't say.
Copyright ©
foreveryoung
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Re: Daddy
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by autumnlady on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 08:00:10 AM AEST
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| Really touching. It moved me a lot. |
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Re: Daddy
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by mistersarang on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 06:48:05 PM AEST
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| how I used to feel |
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Re: Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 11:59:51 PM AEST
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This is sad :( I can also relate to this little girl. My Dad died when I was eight years old.
Nicely done.
Tim |
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Re: Daddy
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 07:03:16 AM AEST
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I actually got chills from this,I have 4 teenage daughters the my x-wife took completely out of my life many years ago when they were babies,& i just pray they feel that way about me,your father would be proud of you sweety,keep you head up high,keep smiling & please keep writing,
the more you write,the better you get,
with each one you get better,now that you can bet,
your writing is awesome,your words always show it,you have been endorsed,by the hot shot poet
thank you so much for sharing |
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