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Angels
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Sunday, 13th May 2012 @ 10:33:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw many Angels today
All around me everywhere
Nary a word did I think to say
Nor a soft breath did I dare
Wings spread wondrous wide
Their angelic shape I did discern
My heart sang as my eyes did cry
My soul felt their concern
Hidden but so easy to seek out
Bringing hope, care to this world
Quietly watching as they hover about
Gently cradling us as life unfurls
Angels follow our daily course
Keeping eyes and hearts on us
Sharing in our happiness or remorse
Endlessly with their belief and trust
Angels take shape in all we see
Mingling with the sun and stars
Joining with the flowers and trees
Love shared both near and far
Angels often walk along side
Guiding your hand along
Joining life's tumbling ride
Listen as they sing heaven's song
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Re: Angels
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by girish on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 10:12:54 AM AEST
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| (M)others are angels |
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Re: Angels
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by dojo1970 on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 08:20:53 AM AEST
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| in my opinion, this poem says nothing about Mother's Day. It doesn't even have the word Mother in the whole poem besides the title. So all in all, the poem is confusing. |
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Re: Angels
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by dojo1970 on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 08:24:58 AM AEST
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| Sorry. I messed up. I thought the title was Mother's Day. I didn't see Angels as the title. My bad. Angels do watch over us like mothers so your poem does reflect that. Sorry for my misinterpretation. |
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Re: Angels
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by workinprogress on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 12:29:54 PM AEST
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| Again, great poem! I was touched and could feel the positive energy of your words. Beautiful, thanks! |
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