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Erasing Photos
Contributed by
Breezy
on
Saturday, 12th May 2012 @ 07:44:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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~ * ~
Not one edge of my heart
can even remember the taste
of the nectar from your smile
The ground heaves with stale words
that never reached the air–
trapped forever in hollow promises
Moments from before fade and fall faint
drowning in the misconception of your need
But the desire of your heart
never took true form;
twisted and black, its deceit rode
boldly into all the flags of future dreams
leaving each one in shreds...
I have no place for you
and you have no cause to linger
Take your smoke and mirrors and leave my destiny
But check your pockets so nothing is forgotten....
not even the memory of you ~
~ * ~
Copyright ©
Breezy
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2012-05-12 07:44:30]
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th May 2012 @ 07:58:59 AM AEST
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In other words, good riddance!!! You say it much much better though.  |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by poewhit on
Saturday, 12th May 2012 @ 07:00:08 PM AEST
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| Poem comes across with a sharp tone. Puts the point across well. |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by doug on
Monday, 14th May 2012 @ 10:01:30 PM AEST
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| Wow.. love , love , love the last couple of lines. Not even the memory of you. You write poems in ways that I could never think to write them and it's great the way you do it. I also love this poem 'cause I'm a person who likes to leave the bad behind and move onto fresh starts. So I've kicked out more than a few bad memories in my day. Great work , truly , doug |
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 05:08:31 PM AEST
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What happened Rox?? This poem is beautiful in its sadness.
Are you ok??
Michelle |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 22nd June 2012 @ 06:11:39 PM AEST
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| Such beauty behind sadness, but I am sure something will rise out of the ashes for someone who is so clearly intelligent and thoughtful. |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 03:20:21 AM AEST
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I got a list of recommendations from Timotheus and you were on it. Must say I'm not disappointed. The site is hard to use with a phone so it will take me years to get through that list at this rate..lol
Thx,
TT |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 01:54:45 AM AEST
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| Beautiful! Love it. |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th September 2012 @ 07:59:39 PM AEST
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Great writing.
I know well how this one goes.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 08:11:31 AM AEST
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| magnificent write..oh that we could all..with word,erase the memory and clear our hearts of painful encounter.The first lines Not one edge of my heart....captured me instantly.Fantastic piece.ND |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 3rd November 2013 @ 10:30:27 PM AEST
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YES!!!!
This is boldly defiant in tone and language. It screamed to come out, and by the end I found my breath caught in my throat. The headstrong Scorpy has taken over, and she is not allowing just anyone to hold her heart.
Oh, I just love this Roxie! I know it came from deep hurt, but what you wrote here both stings AND soothes.
~Scorp |
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Re: Erasing Photos
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 03:54:35 PM AEST
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excellent write, beautifully stated, one always finds out after what was truly there...
big hugs n' love nessa |
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