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Dancer
Contributed by
sebgreen
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Wednesday, 9th May 2012 @ 12:24:49 PM in AEST
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Crimson sunlight pours from the western sky
The water, reeds and I burn.
Pearly white you dance
Amid the flames, the breeze
It stings my eyes and feeds the fire.
With grace, you arc upwards,
Wings spread, gone
Once again.
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2012-05-09 12:24:49]
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Re: Dancer
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by cathartic on
Wednesday, 9th May 2012 @ 08:29:09 PM AEST
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"Crimson sunlight pours from the western sky
The water, reeds and I burn."
Oh the imagery and soon thereafter, jealousy. beautifully written. |
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Re: Dancer
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 10th May 2012 @ 10:42:56 AM AEST
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very nice read thanks for sharing
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Re: Dancer
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 10th May 2012 @ 10:43:05 AM AEST
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very nice read thanks for sharing
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