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same kid different name
Contributed by
Apartment213
on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i ran in burried my head
tested suicide as a cheap thrill
all the luck i never had
the latter fell so many times
agreed to failure trying to escape with no scars
coming in falling down
eating away at myself
tormented and thrilled
the sun comes down on kids who kill themselves
the sky turned red
it was sunday i knew
all the kids and their summer afternoon
i failed to notice i failed to tell u
i was never there when u needed me to be
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Apartment213
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2003-05-08 14:05:00]
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Re: same kid different name
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:19:22 PM AEST
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This was good don't know what to say. For some reason I really love the last line in the first stanza. Thnx for sharing this.
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Re: same kid different name
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by AngryPrincess on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:36:55 PM AEST
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as i have said before and will continue to say...perfection! i love it...so full of emotion...i love you...paint mongoose
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