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Not Going To Quit
Contributed by
MAITRI_GANDHI
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Wednesday, 9th May 2012 @ 08:19:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Earlier, I was so sad
And yes, did i feel bad
Always wanted to quit
Anger reflected in every bit.
Whatever I said
Off the top of my head
Was never appreciated
Was always underestimated.
Gave it a lot of thought
While my head and my heart fought
Searched for water to put out
The fire that inside me would shout.
My behaviour was wrong
And it had been too long
Since i had smiled
Could'nt remember the last time.
And then i said enough
But as life is too rough
It pushed me back everytime
Felt like walking on a crooked line.
But i said i will bounce back
Even if i fall, i will attack
Now happiness is reflected in every bit
Because i knew i was'nt going to quit.
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MAITRI_GANDHI
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2012-05-09 08:19:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Not Going To Quit
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 9th May 2012 @ 09:00:58 AM AEST (User
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Inspiring.The body built up to a very nice conclusion. I had a great time being able to receive some imagery through reading.
Well thought out
Shae |
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Re: Not Going To Quit
(User Rating: 1 ) by bryantjunior on
Wednesday, 9th May 2012 @ 11:28:27 AM AEST (User
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very inspiring poem, it really hit me in a good way. |
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Re: Not Going To Quit
(User Rating: 1 ) by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 10th May 2012 @ 10:50:43 AM AEST (User
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never underestimate your ability inside & never give up
nice read thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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