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Villanelle of Mothers Day
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MothersDayPoems
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Sacred mothers a Heavenly Dove,
Winged upon their heart from firstborn,
A rose we give mothers with love.
Her wings earned,a carnation above,
Mothers with passion we adorn,
Sacred mothers a Heavenly Dove,
Through soft petals,or thorns thereof,
More happy times,and less of mourn,
A rose we give mothers with love.
Loyal mothers from the past,clove,
And to the future children born,
Sacred mothers a heavenly dove.
This day,mothers day,we behove,
And honor once a year reborn,
A rose we give mothers with love.
She's a rose,less the thorn remove,
Singing late eve,and early morn,
Sacred mothers a heavenly dove,
A rose we give mothers with love.
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Re: Villanelle of Mothers Day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 06:46:31 PM AEST
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Nice write, Wes.... Good to see you again..
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Re: Villanelle of Mothers Day
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:15:22 PM AEST
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lovely tribute.
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Re: Villanelle of Mothers Day
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:05:32 PM AEST
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Day 2 No. 2 and we have to look up "Villanelle". You'll make a real poet out of me yet.
This had an almost Shakespearian flavour about it. Whilst I liked the sentiment (who wouldn't) I wasn't comfortable with the texture.
I felt it was too technical for the theme.
Get Wrybod! he who writes with courage born of ignorance.
Bob
PS There is a move afoot to form a group
of honest real poets who dislike "certain elements in YPDC who pen lurid, bloody ,
suicidal prose" which they post as poetry etc. etc
It is being organised by "Eternitys Lyre" a young chap who commands respect beyond his years.
I have taken the liberty of suggesting he gets in touch with you as a "possible valuable addition to our ranks"
(It's up to you of course)
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