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Alone in a crowded maze

Contributed by JOSEJAD on Tuesday, 8th May 2012 @ 09:26:14 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

As I yawn on the longest day
I awake at the center of a crowded maze.
As people walk by me I become bewildered
and started to look down a path in a daze.

To make an executive decision I first went left
only to realize it was just an unintelligent phase.
I suddenly stopped, turned right,
and then gave myself much praise.

As I kept exploring I became Saddened because I saw walls
blocking many of the simple ways.
At this point I am having soliloquy responding
“will this be the end of days”.

Now with much frustration I decided to return
to the commencement of it all,
and that is the center of the maze.
This time around I come prepared with an inquiry
that certainly needed to be raised.

Walking towards a human
I started to Say.
“Excuse me kind sir may
I ask you a question if I may.

Surprisingly the mortal
did not say nay.
There was also not a price
I needed to pay.

I thought to myself
“I here will not lay”.
The knowledge of this fellow
was a massive array.

“O Yes all you have to do is
turn right, then turn left,
and then go that way!”
This is the wisdom of
the clever Mr. Hays.

Now that I have the answer
I will run out and dash to
the exit fast as a blaze.
Finally with much needed assist
I am out of the maze!

I of course one day
will return to answer a question
needed to be raised.
To give the solution to a
loner in a crowded maze.

Copyright Â© JOSEJAD ... [ 2012-05-08 09:26:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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