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Confusions in the foundations of life
Contributed by
RolandS
on
Sunday, 6th May 2012 @ 05:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where the wind blows,
But no eagles fly
Where the thunder woes,
But no children cry.
Where the wells run deep,
But no echo answers back
Where life asks questions,
But the answers lack
Where I am right now
This,
an empty and disembodied place,
Followed by confusion I am
Intrigued
by this mesmerizing maze.
Copyright ©
RolandS
... [
2012-05-06 05:11:18]
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Re: Confusions in the foundations of life
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by TCK on
Sunday, 6th May 2012 @ 07:24:20 AM AEST
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Well done, i like the mysterious/brooding theme of this poem. Well written and good job. :)
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Re: Confusions in the foundations of life
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by CARAAAAA on
Sunday, 6th May 2012 @ 09:58:28 AM AEST
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| I like the mood of thiis |
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