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Dear Dad

Contributed by kingblaq on Thursday, 3rd May 2012 @ 10:17:49 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Hey! Mister!
Yo!
I wrote this piece for ya!

You deceived my ma
You said sweet-nothings to her
You promised her a bed of stars and velvety
night gowns
You said she was your heart
You drank from her springs of euphoria
Sucked from her mountains of passion
Then you dumped her!

You brought me into this cruelty together,
you and ma
But you're not here with her
You denied me, you shamed her!
You took away her spark
Made her an arctic winter river
Stiff, Cold and Sad

Hey!
Today, I swallow saddened milk from ma's
bosom
Today, my face is wet from her tear drops
Today, you're the hottest player in caps
Today, you're all smiles
But the table turns on the morrow!

Tomorrow, the future
Tomorrow, when I become a lawyer, a
doctor,
Or whatever
Tomorrow, when you become a weary
soldier
A fading star
Tomorrow, when I become a husband
Tomorrow, when ma becomes a grandma
Dad!
Tomorrow, when you become lonely and
sad
Tomorrow, when ma's all smiles

Tomorrow, ah! Happy tomorrow.
You're going to wish you stayed with us
Nights of silent tears
As we laugh the last laughs
Nights of regret
Nights you wait for death!!

But before tomorrow
I wish you the best...
Peace




Copyright © kingblaq ... [ 2012-05-03 10:17:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Dear Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by geno81 on Thursday, 3rd May 2012 @ 10:24:53 AM AEST
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love the emotional ups and downs...great
ride !!




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