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Crushed into Dust
Contributed by
ShaeBay
on
Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 04:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Slowly breathing in, trying to catch my breath
Yet there you are taking my life away from me
Sucking out every last bit of my hope
Holding it tightly in your ghastly hands
Crushing the dreams into a mere powder
Like dust, it blew away with the rest of me
Drained of life, cast to the side.
And there you go..
To continue on taking the souls
Of the lost and forgotten
Copyright ©
ShaeBay
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2012-05-01 16:20:24]
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Re: Crushed into Dust
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 04:32:25 PM AEST
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Eeeek! Ghastly!!! Remind me to stay away from this...hmmm..thing?
Nicely done. :)
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Re: Crushed into Dust
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 06:50:57 PM AEST
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great write but I must warn you there is a blind cupid on the loose & I think tim stuck something umm somewhere on him.yes his cupid is blind & a male & now he can't sit down either.lol,omg
thanks for sharing
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