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to my very end

Contributed by darkwolf on Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 04:59:37 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I never thought I would find love again,
this was a feeling I thought I would carry to my very end.

The only girl I ever cared for,
hurt me to my very core.

She turned me down so many times,
and she was the inspiration for so many of my rhymes.

But now I have moved on and am looking for a new girl,
and I'll try my best to get with her and make her my world.

I thought she was the only one I could ever love,
but i am sure an angel will drop down from somewhere from above.

I just hope she don't turn me down,
so I don't have to live my life with a frown.

It's sad,
my first love I could never have.
I still have feeling for her,
and when I think of her,
my eyes start to blur.

Every time I look to the skies,
I see her beautiful eyes.

When I gaze out in space,
there lingers her lovely face.

I hope to find some one new,
So I can make this pain disappear like the mornings dew,

If ever I find love again,
I hope I'll be able to take it to my very end.

Copyright © darkwolf ... [ 2012-05-01 04:59:37]
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Re: to my very end (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 4th May 2012 @ 01:11:35 PM AEST
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Your poem is very touching and lovely But you might have been clinging to the wrong thing or person., who was not what you needed, but what you wanted. A prayer may be denied out of mercy, to keep us out of great mischief and trouble.. So keep looking for the right girl wisele,and when she right and meant for your at the right time b y Providence, , you will get her.

Perhaps a may compose a rictameter to tell how people often want the wrong thing to their own destruction

Have faith and trust!

Blessings
Elizabeth.

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