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To feel what has been said
Contributed by
headphonekid
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Sunday, 29th April 2012 @ 11:38:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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its okay thats what they say
the voices around my head
its not forever if that makes it better
but the changing seasons i do dread
becuase what will happen if we change the thought does scar me so
i guess if we never step
then one can not truly know
the poeple here get on my nerves
youve seen the idiot things they say
they just get worse
like a curse
why did you have to go away
becuase i guess they dont get humer that we could see
and purhaps they are to lost in what they want to be
with no were to vent but to the stars
knowing that your minds in bars
i know that i will continue as will you
i hope you know that as time grows
my mind will always stay true
youve taught me well and sure as hell
memories will be charished well
well...
i must keep stepping forward
even though nobody could know
the weight of the world is on my shoulders
so i must keep composure
a calm mind to traval through time
for when we can chill again
until then
goodbye for now my friend
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2012-04-29 23:38:04]
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Re: To feel what has been said
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 02:33:28 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Other than a few misspelled words this is a great write. It touches the soul and heart. Very powerful write.
Blessings, huggs,
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Re: To feel what has been said
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by bryantjunior on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 06:02:23 AM AEST
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| very good, grammar needs to improve, but overall good poem. |
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