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Who Can?
Contributed by
bryantjunior
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Sunday, 29th April 2012 @ 06:23:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It was a fire that burnt the water.
The strongest lamb, up for the slaughter.
It was stupid when it needed to be clever.
Left to be confused in life. Forever.
It had perfect vision but couldn’t see anything.
The voice of an angel, but it couldn’t sing.
Bad feelings reigned down all the time.
Like an athlete chopped down in his prime.
It was like a wild animal, that needed to be set free.
Or man who couldn’t swim, but is stranded out at sea.
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Re: Who Can?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 09:29:28 PM AEST (User
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I don't know what to say, except to say, this is very very good.
I mean that I really liked it a lot.
Peace! |
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