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Drowning
Contributed by
gypsymaddness
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Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 04:25:04 PM in AEST
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I can see your tears,and I can understand your fears.Your a little like me,you just want to be free.But the world trys to drag you down,into the ocean deep,and life trys to knock you down,into whatever bad catigory.Lost hope follows you,dragged alongweighing you downtrying to resist, but not strong.Holding you to the bottommaking you drown,then the seaweed tangles you,to hold you to the new kingdom you found.I can see your tears,and I can understand your fears.Your a little like me,you just want to be free.
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Re: Drowning
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by gbrain17 on
Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 04:58:46 PM AEST
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| i not sure how, but great expression. i like it |
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Re: Drowning
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by Raggie on
Sunday, 29th April 2012 @ 03:19:20 AM AEST
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I felt the seaweed swaying in your words. I saw hope as an anchor that keeps one pinned, against the reinforced glass, of a tomorrow that never comes.
I liked the sway of your poem. Thank you:) |
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Re: Drowning
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by jadey121 on
Sunday, 29th April 2012 @ 07:13:35 PM AEST
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| The reminded me of a time I went through myself. It had real depth to it. Well done :-) |
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