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Trading skins
Contributed by
gypsymaddness
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Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 04:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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If I were someone else,maybe I wouln't be in hell.If I traded skins,Maybe I wouln't be full of sin.If my soul was anothers,maybe the darkness wouldn't bother.If my heart became exchanged,maybe I would be strong enough to overcome hate.Maybe I would be better and lighter,If I traded skins with a fighter.And not a thinker,or a believer,but maybe even better,trading skins with a confider.
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Re: Trading skins
(User Rating: 1 )
by TCK on
Sunday, 29th April 2012 @ 11:57:50 AM AEST
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Moving Poem! It is quite catchy and clearly communicates a stuggle for self-definition and inner confidence! Really nice!
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Re: Trading skins
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 09:47:37 AM AEST
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rhyme is wonderful! lovely expression of feelings:: but
i've got to say, be happy in that skin your in, its
connected to that beautiful talented soul you have:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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