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Red-haired Trifling *****
Contributed by
dalecooper
on
Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 03:10:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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she walks out the station
leans on the wall
and waits for him
lights a cigarette
checks her lips in the mirror
outlines the red lips till they get in place
trying to believe in her beauty
to be pretty enough for him
he doesn't show up
but he sends her a text
''come where we met''
then she walks down the street (body shaking)
lights another cigarette and talks to herself:
''pretend everything's in order''
you, disturbed *****
she's weird, more weird than he thought she'd be
too complicated for him
finally, they meet and kiss gingerly
she puts spaces in between to believe
she's not hooked with him
anyhow, she will get kicked out eventually
how long lasts the path of sadness and despair
it takes a very long time to settle down, eh?
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dalecooper
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2012-04-27 15:10:23]
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Re: Red-haired Trifling *****
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 08:32:24 AM AEST
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good write thanks for sharing
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Re: Red-haired Trifling *****
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by richard2 on
Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 04:44:34 PM AEST
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Interesting writing, where is pair going to end up? a question which has been asked forever. The poem certainly captured my interest. Write more and keep the narrative going.
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